Say it With Style - Write a Flippa Auction Description That Sells

I will be the first to admit that taking the time to write aNow that you know what you want to say, arrange it
description for a site flip, is not the most thrilling thing inin an order that makes sense. If you jump around a lot
the world but in the end I know that the time is wellin your description, it will appear confusing and sloppy.
worth it. Think about it this way; if a buyer is shoppingYou want to make sure that site's details flow nicely
around for a site about golf and comes across twofrom one topic to the next. Here is how I like to
sites that catch their interest and both are relativityorganize the details of my description.
similar in all aspects, what will give one seller the edge- Short description about the topic of the site.
over the other? A great presentation...and that is- Google Stats about the keywords related to the
essentially what your description is. It is a sales pitch ofniche.
what makes your site so spectacular. Write a great- Anything special or unique about the site.
one and you may just beat out your competition; write- Description of Revenue Streams
a bad one and you probably just gave your bid away.- Buy It Now Bonuses (this is only applicable if I'm using
As you venture into writing a description for you site,the BIN feature)
remember that potential buyers don't know you- Hosting Information
personally. Essentially, that means that they don't know3. Be Concise
just how flipping awesome you are (see what I didMost people are very busy and don't want to read a
right there?) and that you are going to have to work, iflengthy description. Get your point across but stick to
you're going to convince them that you are. Therefore,listing only the important facts that a buyer needs to
creating a powerful, well written description is essentialknow to make a purchase decision. If you take my
to gain a stranger's confidence about your work.advice and get clear on your thoughts first, you will
How the description is presented will paint a picture forhave already sorted the important points from the
the buyer of what they can expect in terms of qualityunimportant points, so being concise should not be a
from you; good or bad. A well written description willproblem.
show that you care about your work and that you4. Be Proactive
present yourself in a professional manner. On thePut yourself in their shoes and pretend that you don't
other hand, a sloppy, poorly worded, and confusinghave any knowledge about the site with the exception
description will show lack of effort and portray that theof what is written in your description. Then go and
quality of your site is no better than your description.read back your description to yourself from their point
So that brings us to the question of what makes aof view. How does it portray your site? Does it make
good writer? Is it having a college degree from somesense?
fancy school? No (thank God). Is it having impeccableRemember, the only info they have about your site is
grammar and punctuation skills? It helps, but since thewhat you put in your description and that you only get
majority of people couldn't tell you where a commaone shot to get your point across. If something is
goes, or what a semi colon does, those skills only equalconfusing to them, you won't be standing next to them
a small piece of the "good writing skills" pie.to clarify. At that point you have to hope that they are
How can I say this for sure? Well not to toot my ownwilling to take the time to send you a private message
horn, but in college I always got A's in English (okayto ask for clarification, but will they, is the question? Of
maybe just one little toot) and I really excelled at it tocourse some buyers will ask questions, and give you
the point that one of my English professors tried tothe chance to respond. However, think about it from a
convince me to become an English major. However,sales point of view, while they are waiting for your
because I dreaded writing papers so much, I wonderedresponse, they may begin to lose interest and start to
how in the end I always ended up being so good at it.question if they really need your site after all. Whereas,
After analyzing my writing style, I realized that whatif you do your best to be proactive and answer as
caused me to create a well written paper, didn't havemany questions as you can before they even ask
a whole lot to do with my grammar/punctuation skillsthem, you are increasing your chances that they will
(yes it does help to have a decent foundation in theimmediately act on their interest and bid on your site.
basics) but it was really much more about gathering5. Proofread
my thoughts and at times stepping back and writingI can't stress this one enough. This is your chance to
from someone's else's point of view instead of mymake sure that the description is as polished as
own.possible. No matter how well your words may have
Here are a few tips that you can use to help write anflowed when writing your description, you'd be
outstanding description for your site flip. I took thesurprised when you go back and re-read it, how many
same approach that I used in college that earned melittle things you missed the first time. If you don't
those A's (okay maybe that was another toot) andproofread, you again risk appearing sloppy. You may
made it applicable to writing a site description.think "so what if I missed a word here or there, it's just
1. Clarity of thoughta little detail." Well those little details matter because
It is extremely important to be clear about theneglecting those little details will translate to the buyer
message that you are trying to convey to buyers. Ifthat you may have also been neglectful to detail when
you don't know what you are trying to say, how willcreating your site.
they? Before you just start typing away, take a fewOkay, I know I have thrown a lot at you. If writing isn't
minutes to jot down the major points about your siteyour strong suit, in the beginning it may be time
that are important for the buyer to know.consuming, but not doing it may cost you sales.
2. Organize Your Thoughts